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Shiny, Happy, Pretty:
Television Series (1-Hour Pilot)

Overview  

A working-class college freshman at an Ivy League school becomes involved with a wealthy, older meth manufacturer—drawn into a world of money, drugs, and status, and forced to confront the consequences of it all.

Development Work

Script development and structural consulting focused on strengthening story architecture, refining character arcs, and enhancing plot progression.

Result

A fully developed and polished pilot script prepared for submission and pitching.

“Terry helped me take a script that just didn’t work and turn it into a script I’m proud of and excited to shop. His strength in structure and story development made a significant difference, while still preserving my voice.”
— Renee B. Ferguson
Lost Innocence: One Hour Drama
Television Series
(Pitch Bible Development)


Overview

A self-made fashion designer, driven by the abuse of innocent children, leads a dangerous double life—delivering her own form of justice while navigating love, secrecy, and the risk of being exposed.

Development Work

Development and writing of a full TV Series Pitch Bible, focused on clarifying the concept, strengthening character dynamics, and articulating a compelling and sustainable series engine.

Result
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A clear, professionally structured Pitch Bible designed to support pitching, development conversations, and producer engagement.

“Terry is a prolific writer and a pleasure to work with. He understood my vision and was incredibly easy to collaborate with throughout the process.”
— Rose LaFrance


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King of Dance:
Television Series
(Pilot & Pitch Development)


Overview

An ambitious but naïve dance instructor navigates romance, hierarchy, and intense rivalries within the high-stakes, Russian-dominated world of competitive ballroom dancing.

Development Work
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Pilot development and pitch refinement focused on translating the core concept into a clear, compelling television format, while strengthening structure, character dynamics, and overall presentation.

Result

A refined pilot and pitch aligned with industry expectations, clearly communicating the concept, tone, and series potential to producers and executives.

“Terry helped translate my pilot into a format that television executives can understand and get excited about. He was a true creative partner—strengthening the work while staying true to my voice.”  
— Artemi Okunev

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Cartel North:
Television Series
(Pilot & Pitch Development)


Overview

A crime drama set in the high-stakes world of 1980s cocaine trafficking, following a young man pulled into the glamour, danger, and excess of Pablo Escobar’s smuggling network as it expands across the United States.

Development Work

Pilot and pitch development focused on strengthening story structure, enhancing tone and genre clarity, and building a more compelling and market-ready series concept.

Result
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A stronger, more dynamic pilot with a clearly defined tone and narrative drive, positioning the project for further development and presentation.

“Terry didn’t just give notes—he elevated the script and gave it real strength and momentum. The difference in the project was immediate.  Blew me away.”
— Ray Mann

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The Toxic City Rejects:
Feature Screenplay
(Development & Rewrite Support)


Overview

A group of homeless, rejected teens form a bond through music as they confront authority, trauma, and their own identities—finding purpose and rebellion through their shared voice.

Development Work

Script development and rewrite support focused on clarifying story direction, strengthening character arcs, and resolving structural and narrative issues through a collaborative development process.

Result

A more focused and cohesive screenplay with stronger story clarity, improved character development, and a clear direction for execution.

“Terry helped me find the direction of the script and solve major story issues before the rewrite process even began. His collaborative approach kept the momentum going and made a significant difference in the final result.”
— Jeremy Cleek

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Don’t Worry About It:
Feature Screenplay
(Development & Rewrite Support)


Overview

A second-generation South Philadelphia street hood struggles to live up to his father’s criminal legacy while becoming entangled in a surreal and conflicted relationship with a younger version of his saintly mom that forces him to choose between opposing moral paths.

Development Work

Script analysis and development support focused on breaking through story obstacles, refining structure, and guiding the project through key creative decisions.

Result

A completed screenplay with a clear direction for rewrites and continued development.

“Terry’s insight and development notes helped me break through a major creative wall and move the script forward to completion.”
— Steve Sacavitch


​Script development and consulting across film and television projects, working with writers, filmmakers, and creators to strengthen story, structure, and dialogue.
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