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       Story Builders is a professional writing service that provides Script Doctoring, Consulting and Coaching for TV Writers and Screenwriters.  We are dedicated to helping writers and creators  find and hone their own unique and original Voice.

​How are you bringing "you" to the page in ways that only you can? 

How do you see the world in a way that nobody else does?  How are you expressing it in a way that nobody else can? 

The writer's own unique voice is the most important thing you can bring to the page because it is who you truly are, it is your life experiences--it is how you see the world and it issues from a place that is totally your own.   

Think back to how you felt when you first came up with the idea for your story.  Pretty good feeling, huh?  You were jazzed, right?  This is so cool, yeah?  You saw the characters, the world, the situations and they were popping, weren’t they?  They just would not leave you alone.  And, in these moments you knew exactly how it all should look, feel, sound—but more importantly you knew how it was going to make other people feel too. 

​The main question most writers have when working with us on their projects is simply this, "is how I see the world and the situations in this story resonating in the ways I imagined?"  This is our number one concern.

By nurturing the writers own unique voice, we hone in and build on what makes your story both marketable and fresh.   Are you ready to get started?

Let's talk about your script, story or project.  We offer a free 30 minute consultation by phone--no obligation with our founder, Terry McFadden.

Testimonials from a few of Terry's clients             Some of his own Productions

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"I have been getting notes from Terry on my projects for better than 10 years and I am always glad I did.  Best thing about them is they allow me to turn up what is already working and make it better".

--Narmar Hannah:  Show Creator and Producer (The Luxury Rental; The Diner's Club)

Narmartini Productions 

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"Terry was great to work with on my book "Return of Ixtab" and adapting it into a screenplay.  He did a great job and on the timeframe I needed.   Thanks Terry, for all your help!"
 
​--Robert Zitella


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Return of Ixtab

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"I have collaborated with Terry on numerous creative projects and admire his ability to take the initiative and make things happen. He worked hard to assure these projects exposed us to new audiences and illuminated the strengths of our talents."

 --Tom Misuraca, multi-award winning playwright and screenwriter (Geeks, the Musical; Krampus; Happy Holidays)
​http://www.tommiz.com/index.html

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"I used Terry’s script analysis for one of my multi-cam scripts and it was exactly what I needed.  Terry improved my scripts direction and flow with his knowledge of what executives, producers, managers, and agents are looking for.  All of this help and experience for a great price.   I will continue to use Terry’s service for future scripts and highly recommend Terry to any writer out there needing help to get their script pitch ready.  Thank you, Terry".
 
--Natasha Persad & Justin Scott (Writing Team)
https://www.facebook.com/teamnatashajustintv/
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"My screenplay, "Trial and Erin" has been named a finalist is the Script Pimp competition (top 20 out of 2700 submissions); finalist in the Script Showcase contest (top 8 out of 437 entries); and finalist in the Screenplay Festival screenwriting contest. It also placed as a quarter-finalist and higher in about a half dozen other contests. I also have been able to find a manager.  Thanks, Terry, for all your help!"

--Larry Shulruff


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