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Current Projects and Writers
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Lost Innocence: A Television Series by Rose LaFrance - Written Pitch Bible
A young, self-made fashion designer, incensed with the horrors inflicted on innocent children by child molesters takes on a dual identity and metes out her own brand of justice, while evading authorities, chasing love, and doing her best to not let anyone see who she truly is. Testimonial: "I worked with Terry on the treatment for our television series; He’s a prolific writer and a pleasure to work with, I truly enjoyed our working relationship. If you are seeking someone to see your vision and easy to work with, then I would recommend Terry - Rose LAFRANCE |
King Of Dance: A Television Series by Artemi Okunev - Pilot and Pitch
Testimonial: "Terry is more than an editor or a coach or even a season script writer with the "know how"... Terry is a partner. He takes a personal interest in your work. Takes time to understand you, your Voice and what is it that you want. A bridge to take you from where you are to where you want to be.
With me he translated what my pilot was about into a language that TV execs can understand and be excited about. He channeled my vision into the correct TV format. He does it honestly but ever so gently so as to build you up for the challenges that are coming ahead. He is the guy in your corner and also the guy who keeps you honest and accountable. So if you are in need of someone like that, and if you are reading this, then you do... Give Terry a call" - Artemi Okunev
- An ambitious but naïve black wannabe dance instructor sambas with romance, pecking order and the clashing of massive egos in the Russian dominated cutthroat world of ballroom dancing.
Testimonial: "Terry is more than an editor or a coach or even a season script writer with the "know how"... Terry is a partner. He takes a personal interest in your work. Takes time to understand you, your Voice and what is it that you want. A bridge to take you from where you are to where you want to be.
With me he translated what my pilot was about into a language that TV execs can understand and be excited about. He channeled my vision into the correct TV format. He does it honestly but ever so gently so as to build you up for the challenges that are coming ahead. He is the guy in your corner and also the guy who keeps you honest and accountable. So if you are in need of someone like that, and if you are reading this, then you do... Give Terry a call" - Artemi Okunev
Cartel North: A Television series by Ray Mann - Pilot and Pitch
This Miami Vice feel crime drama looks at the world of cocaine trafficking from the point of view of one particular faction of Pablo Escobar’s smuggling regime moving "the blow" across America. The world of the mid 1980’s glam, debauchery, danger, greed, excess and a young man wondering how in hell he got mixed up in all of it. Testimonial: "I came to Terry at Story Builders because my pilot script needed another set of eyes. But what he did was amped it up, gave my script a great set of legs to stand on, and just blew me away!" - Ray Mann 
Don’t Worry About It:
A screenplay by Steve Sacavitch When a second generation South Philadelphia street hood, who is having trouble walking a mile in his father’s crooked shoes falls in love with a younger version of his “do the right thing” mother, he is set upon a twisted path of mixed alliances, inner conflicts and confused desires while treading the tightrope of trying to serve two masters. Testimonial: "We have all heard the expression "You may need a second pair of eyes". Never has it been more true than when I started out to write my first screenplay. It was going great until I hit the creative wall. I have known Terry for a long time and I have always knew that he was creative and insightful. I sent him what I had written. His breakdown and suggestions helped get me over that creative wall. I not only finished my script but I am currently working on my rewrites. I highly recommend Story Builders Script Doctor Services. PS. What A great second pair of eyes." - Steve Sacavitch |
The Toxic City Rejects: A screenplay by Jeremy Cleek
“The Toxic City Rejects” is a story about four homeless and parentally rejected teens, who, through their music and common issues, band together to take on authority figures and their own childhood trauma while banging out some pretty cool tunes in the doing. Testimonial: “Before starting the rewrite process, I had no idea in which direction I wanted to take my script. Terry took the time to read it and really understand it, and that is what sold me on taking notes from him. I chose to go with his Dual Development service, because it would allow an interactive and collaborative process in cracking the specific story and character beats before I had to start typing pages again. Receiving detailed notes on-the-fly as I wrote sections of the script was crucial to keeping the momentum going and staying on track. And it really paid off. Many of the story issues and plot holes that would normally consume a writer and drive him into a post-scriptum depression are no longer a concern because we've already worked them out. Working with Terry is like having your own coach, critic, editor and cheerleader, all in one. He'll lift you up when you need it, but he’ll also give it to you straight.” - Jeremy Cleek |