Detailed Script Analysis for Film and Television​  

​Script Triage & Development Notes

A detailed script analysis designed to identify what’s working, what isn’t, and how to move your project forward with clarity.  If your script has strong elements but isn’t fully landing yet, this process provides a clear, professional assessment of the story, structure, and execution on the page.

What This Covers

Your script is evaluated across all major areas of development:

• Story and structure
• Character and relationships
• Dialogue and character voice
• Theme and premise
• Genre and tone
The analysis identifies both strengths and problem areas, with specific recommendations for improving the script.

What You Receive

Screenplays:

• Logline and premise evaluation
• 1 to 2-page synopsis
• Detailed development notes (8–10 pages)
• Summary with clear next steps

Television Pilots:

• Premise and concept evaluation
• Detailed “studio-style” notes (6–8 pages)
• Focus on series potential and long-term viability

The Approach

This process is both analytical and collaborative.  In addition to identifying structural and dialogue issues, special attention is given to strengthening the writer’s unique voice—ensuring the script feels consistent, distinctive, and fully realized.

Why This Matters

Clear, professional development notes can:

• identify issues quickly
• provide direction for rewrites
• strengthen the script before submission or production
• help position the project for producers, talent, or financing

Additional Support:

Follow-up consultation is available to review notes and discuss next steps.

Let’s Strengthen Your Script.  If you have a draft that needs a deeper level of analysis and direction, I’d be happy to help.

Rates vary depending on project scope. Contact Terry to discuss.

Advanced Development Option​

​Page by Page Script Notes 

Advanced Development & Rewrite Support

​For projects on a deadline or in active development, this is a more detailed and actionable extension of the script analysis process.  In addition to full development notes, your script is reviewed page by page, with precise, targeted feedback on execution.

What This Includes:

• Line-by-line and page-specific notes
• Exact identification of issues and opportunities
• Clear, actionable revision suggestions
• Guidance on dialogue, pacing, and structure in real time

Each note explains what needs adjustment, why it matters, and how to improve it.

When This Is Most Useful

• Tight rewrite deadlines
• Scripts moving toward production
• Projects requiring precise execution adjustments
• Writers who want a highly guided revision process

The Benefit

This process accelerates rewrites significantly by providing clear, immediate direction on the page, allowing you to move through revisions with speed and confidence.

Availability

This service is offered as an upgrade to Detailed Script Analysis.

Rates vary depending on scope and timeline.  Contact Terry to discuss your project.