Detailed Analysis: A great way to go when preparing to do your own revision or rewrite.
Detailed Script Analysis
I read and analyze your current screenplay, script or play (up to 125 pages) and then give Detailed Development Notes.
In great depth and detail, the script is assessed in the major vital areas of Story; Structure; Character and Relationships; Dialogue; Premise/Themes; and Genre Considerations.
The analysis includes a Cover Sheet, a Logline, a Grid Chart, 1-2 page Synopsis and 8-10 pages of Comments. Specific notes on your script in the major areas that constitute a great script. The detailed notes clearly discern what is working in the script and why, and what is not working and why not. We then suggest several remedies and fixes and delineate, explain and embellish just how to go about it and why these fixes will work.
A one on one phone consultation.
E-mail correspondence as needed.